Pretty good rewrite I understand about "self-aggrandizing" - I call it PR. I actually believe the slogans, but they are PR-ish for sure and perhaps we are better without them.
VoH makes order out of chaos by group crosstalk. Unlike conventional social media which encourages siloed talk within groups, VoH promotes talk between groups.
How about this? (When we have the Crosstalk facility working, we can have more to say.)
Voices of Humanity brings order out of chaos by connecting communities. Unlike other social media, which encourage siloed talk within groups, VoH promotes talk between groups. It does this by giving a collective voice to the genders and generations as well as to humanity-as-one. Each of these six Voices of Humanity transcend all community boundaries.
Darn - that doesn't quite do it, but I have to run. More tomorrow.
